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~Bartholomew Charne~ The kiss felt like an eternity. I watched as Slade walked out to feed her horse. I love the way her skirt swayed as she walked. It made ...

why are we talking about dictionaries?

because you're out of magic markers! What color is........purple? :D

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

10/10! Very cute and I have heard it before and i looooooove it! I forgot that I had created this! haha! Mat Bellamy, that is hialrious!

Okay, I don't think that this "story" should be in this forum. I think you should seperate the lines and re-post it in "Other Poetry". Other than that it was ...

This had great had great was sad, but it was great! :D Good Job!

Okay....this was good but this.... Everyday they fight for our Rights and freedoms, is a no-no. Never seperate a whole sentence just to keep the rythym. That just makes the ...

I did like this poem. It rhymed and had good rhythym. Maybe you could of seperated the last line apart. It did sound mushy and off balance when two words ...

I agree with the user above me. People like meat and potatoes! This wasn't anything but a salad dish. I am not trying to be rude, but if you changed ...

This piece was deep and.....sad? Hurtful? One of those. Don't get me wrong though. It was a very beautiful piece! I liked it! :D Goood JOB!

I enjoyed this piece! It was very thorough and beautiful. It is very.....dramatic and.... another word that I do not know :D I don't look for grammar errors or spelling ...

This was very good! I think it was an amazing peice of work. The rythym was clear and so were the words and the defenitions that you meant for them ...

Awwww! This is very cute! I like it, but it is a little to lovey dovey for me. This would be like a very silly teenage romance poem! :D I ...

WOAH! Teddy, this was very good! The user above me is correct! You are a brilliant writer and I have never thought of this before! Very good and keep writing! ...